A frightening experiences--draft one
Typhoons usually hit Taiwan during the summer or autumn.
Typhoon was one of the most frightening experiences that I've had in my life.
Before the typhoon came, Tainan already had violent storm and rain.
The meteorological office published the typhoon alarm.
But we still had to go to school.
In the morning, the storm seemed to destroy my windows in my bedroom.
Then, I took the bus to train station.
The violent rain and storm made me can't be on my feet.
There was a few pedestrians and taxis on roads.
After we arriving the school the chairman told us quit studying in the afternoon.
And my mom called me and told that we didn't have to work and study.
We saw a tree pulled up by the roots due to the typhoon.
My father drove car and pick me up home.
The news told the fierce typhoon did great damage to crops and buildings.
Even caused landslides that paralyzed the traffic.
And our community interrupted the electrical power.
So we have to take care the typhoon alarm and get prepared in advance.
Therefore, the damage can be minimized.
Typhoon was one of the most frightening experiences that I've had in my life.
Before the typhoon came, Tainan already had violent storm and rain.
The meteorological office published the typhoon alarm.
But we still had to go to school.
In the morning, the storm seemed to destroy my windows in my bedroom.
Then, I took the bus to train station.
The violent rain and storm made me can't be on my feet.
There was a few pedestrians and taxis on roads.
After we arriving the school the chairman told us quit studying in the afternoon.
And my mom called me and told that we didn't have to work and study.
We saw a tree pulled up by the roots due to the typhoon.
My father drove car and pick me up home.
The news told the fierce typhoon did great damage to crops and buildings.
Even caused landslides that paralyzed the traffic.
And our community interrupted the electrical power.
So we have to take care the typhoon alarm and get prepared in advance.
Therefore, the damage can be minimized.

7 Comments:
After we arriving the school the chairman told us quit studying in the afternoon.應該是After arriving
My father drove car and "pick" me up home.要加ed唷~
arrive 後面要加介係詞
pick me up ->picked me up
But we still had to go >>盡量不要用but開頭
After we arriving the school the chairman told>>,and the chairman...
我覺得句子有用and 和so的開頭最好都換成別的耶
After we "arriving the school" the chairman told us quit studying in the afternoon.應該是arriving in the school.
1.Typhoon was one of the most frightening experiences that I've had in my life.妳的主詞用typhoon很奇怪,應該是經歷可怕的typhoon之類的吧(一件事)
2.The violent rain and storm made me "unable to" be on my feet.
3.After we "arrived at" the school "," the chairman told us "to" quit studying in the afternoon.
4.My father drove "the" car "to "pick me up home.
5.The news "reported" that...
6."It" even caused landslides that paralyzed the traffic
1.Before the typhoon came, Tainan already had violent storm and rain.那個後面那句應該是Tainan already had had violent storm and rain.
2.But we still had to go to school.
那個but是連接詞要連接兩個句子
3.There was a few pedestrians and taxis on roads.
應該要用複數吧
4.有很多句的開頭都是and但如果要這樣用記得它是連接詞需要連接兩個句子
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