Autobiography(1.2)--draft two
Before the end of the 1989, a baby girl was born in Tainan City.That’s me!My name is Yi-lin Kao, and English name is Tina.There are five members in my family.My father is a fireman.Although he is busy and always not at home, we are satisfied that he can take care of us and be responsible for this family.My mother, an excellent housewife, is really good at cleaning the house environment.I am the elder child in my family.When it came to my brother, you would feel he was common, but he was careful and talkative.My sister, she is hard-working.So we hope that she will achieve success and win recognition.I am very lucky to be brought up in such a healthy and harmonious environment so that I have a positive perspective toward life.I like to play volleyball and badminton.I used to be a member of the volleyball team in my class.Our team always wins the championship in the interclass competitions.After the competitions, my classmates and I always go to school to play volleyball in our free time.We deeply believe that is because of our constant practice and our strong team spirit.On the other hand, I also like some quiet activities like listening to music and reading some famous novels in my bedroom.These activities help me relieve my pressure and the books make me become more artistic.

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Before the end of the 1989, a baby girl was born in Tainan City.
That's me! My name is Yi-lin Kao, and my English name is Tina. There are five members in my family. My father is a fireman. Although he is busy and always not at home, we are satisfied that he can take care of us and be responsible for this family. My mother, an excellent housewife, is really good at cleaning the house. I am the elder child in my family. My brother was an ordinary boy, but he was careful and talkative. My (elder/younger) sister is hard-working, so we hope that she will achieve success and win recognition. I am very lucky to be brought up in such a healthy and harmonious environment so that I have a positive perspective toward life.
I am fond of playing volleyball and badminton. I am a member of the volleyball team in my class. Our team always wins the championship in the interclass competitions. Besides, my classmates and I always go to school to play volleyball in our free time. We deeply believe that is because of our constant practice and our strong team spirit. On the other hand, I also like some quiet activities, like listening to music and reading some famous novels in my bedroom. These activities help me relieve my pressure and reading books make me become more artistic. All these hobbies makes me what I am today.
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