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(1.)It is imortant to choose TV channels carefully.
TV is the most important way to provide information and entertainment, but it probably has some disadvantages.
Some channels are full of violence and lust has harmful influence on teenagers.
Spending much time watching TV will do harm to our eyesight.
Therefore, we should choose TV channels which are beneficial to our bodies and hearts.
The most important thing is don't be a couch potato.
(2.)The computers play an important role in our daily lives.
They can help students to hand in homework fast and help people to transmit information, too.
As long as turn on the computer, and you must fall in love with it.
How ever, you are sure to remind yourself, don’t sit in front of computers for a long time.
Most of parents don’t like children to depend on computers.
Especially, it is wastes lots of time discussing on the bulletin boards.
TV is the most important way to provide information and entertainment, but it probably has some disadvantages.
Some channels are full of violence and lust has harmful influence on teenagers.
Spending much time watching TV will do harm to our eyesight.
Therefore, we should choose TV channels which are beneficial to our bodies and hearts.
The most important thing is don't be a couch potato.
(2.)The computers play an important role in our daily lives.
They can help students to hand in homework fast and help people to transmit information, too.
As long as turn on the computer, and you must fall in love with it.
How ever, you are sure to remind yourself, don’t sit in front of computers for a long time.
Most of parents don’t like children to depend on computers.
Especially, it is wastes lots of time discussing on the bulletin boards.
posted by Tina at 7:44 PM
7 Comments:
imortant->important
Some channels are full of violence and lust "has" harmful influence on teenagers.->have
don’t sit in front of computers for a long time.加個the吧！
it is wastes lots of time discussing on the bulletin boards. 要改成discussing on the bulletin boards is wastes lots of time.
is not to be a couch potato
However 分開了
1..channel是管道吧..節目的話用program比較好吧!
2..身心->body and mind
3..fast->quickly比較好
4..How ever->however
5..you are sure to remind yourself
->be sure to 前面要用be才會是務必的意思
1.The computers用單數比較好
2.How ever分太開了
3. it is wastes lots of time discussing不用加is
1.Some channels are full of violence and lust has harmful influence on teenagers.用has 話就兩個動詞卡一起了，可以用關代之類的
2.那個可以全部放一起就好了，不用分開而且用字可以再深一點
3.The computers play an important role in our daily lives那個lives用life
4.How ever分太開了
5.you are sure to remind yourself, don’t sit in front of computers for a long time.
覺得怪怪的，那個don't前面用逗點怪怪的，整句我覺得可以改you should remind yourself don't sit in front of the computer for a long time
1.in our daily "life"
2.As long as "you" turn on the computer, you must fall in love with it.
3."be sure to" remind yourself
4.it "wastes" lots of time discussing on the bulletin boards.
1.important way to provide
我覺得way用channl比較好
Spending much time watching TV will do harm to our eyesight.
加too
不用加do吧?
2.How ever
分開了
you are sure to remind
you must be sure to 比較好
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