Tips of keeping healthy--draft one
It goes without saying that "Health is above wealth."
A healthy person has the strength and energy to achieve his goal and can deal with tensions as well as stresses better.
But how can we keep healthy?
First, a balanced diet and proper exercise are indispensable.
We have to do exercise three times a week.
And we can eat some food are rich in vitamins and nutritions.
Second, living a regular life is also very important for good health.
Keeping good hours is a best policy.
Third, arrange some recreations from time to time to take our mind off our work.
On weekends, we can go to scenic sites with our family to breathe fresh air.
Take good care of our bodies because only with good health can make our life more enjoyable.
A healthy person has the strength and energy to achieve his goal and can deal with tensions as well as stresses better.
But how can we keep healthy?
First, a balanced diet and proper exercise are indispensable.
We have to do exercise three times a week.
And we can eat some food are rich in vitamins and nutritions.
Second, living a regular life is also very important for good health.
Keeping good hours is a best policy.
Third, arrange some recreations from time to time to take our mind off our work.
On weekends, we can go to scenic sites with our family to breathe fresh air.
Take good care of our bodies because only with good health can make our life more enjoyable.

7 Comments:
1.we can eat some food (are) rich in vitamins and nutritions.
寫的還不錯呢!
我挑不出來 寫的很好 。ˇ。
1. can deal with tensions as well as stresses better.用their tensions ....比較好
2.But how can we keep healthy?
應該是health
3.Keeping good hours is a best policy.應該用the best ...
4.Third, arrange some recreations from time to time to take our mind off our work用arranging比較好,應該是這樣吧
Take good care of our bodies 是不是要用taking阿!
寫的很優唷!!^^
我前面好像寫錯了stay 後面應該可以用healthy
不錯不錯~
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