Computer and I--draft one
Computers are playing an important role in our life.With it, we find it rather convenient to deal with daily work.For example, we use them to control the work of our washing machines, TV sets, air conditioners, other electrical appliances, and so on.We also use them to store a large amount of information, which can be used everywhere.Besides, being used at homes, computers are also used in business, transportation, education, entertainment, medicine, etc.They play a key role in automation.Without computers, this world would simply be unimaginable.
However, computers never can replace with human brains.Although computers work much faster and much more correctly than human beings to be able to handle it.In addition, they can’t make decisions on their own and they have no feeling, either.Therefore, no matter how intelligent they can be, they just machines made by human beings.They will never replace our places.
However, computers never can replace with human brains.Although computers work much faster and much more correctly than human beings to be able to handle it.In addition, they can’t make decisions on their own and they have no feeling, either.Therefore, no matter how intelligent they can be, they just machines made by human beings.They will never replace our places.

7 Comments:
寫的還不錯,可是第二段應該要寫妳的喜好吧…
還不錯
第二段喜不喜歡要先說
看起來很流暢。ˇ。
不錯不錯!!
但第二段不是要寫自己的喜好嗎?
這篇讀起來很順欸!
ok的啦!
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