Wednesday, June 20, 2007

Making decisions--draft one

Growing up means making my own decisions.Now, I am responsible for making decisions by myself.I was not that girl who is childish and unwise before.Now, I am independent because I am old enough to do everything on my own.For this reason, I have to learn how can I make decision on my own.The hardest decision that I ever made was choosing senior high school or vocational senior high school.When I received my report card of my Second BC test, I discussed with my parents which was better.They considered that I should choose a senior high school which I was interested in.Because of that, I would study happily and easily.

4 Comments:

Blogger Butterfly said...

1.I was not that girl who is childish and unwise before那個who is that用that怪怪的,而且是who was ....

2.I have to learn how can I make decision on my own那個應該是how I can

8:25 PM  
Blogger 梁宜靜 said...

I am independent because I am old enough to do everything on my own"way".比較順
I discussed with my parents which"one" was better..卡順

8:33 PM  
Blogger 許雅婷 said...

I have to learn how can I make decision on my own.可以改成how to make

8:34 PM  
Blogger FawnYma said...

1.I "am" not that girl who "was" childish and unwise "any longer".
2. I have to learn how "to make" decision on my own. 感覺比較順
3.結論句?

8:36 PM  

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