Recycling--draft one
To resolve the garbage problem, recycling is very important.Taiwan is as a piece of sand in the desert, but garbage has increased with the growth of the population.
In order to protect our home, we have to reduce the amount of trash, and exalt the quality of life at the same time.Therefore, recycling is the best policy .If we devote time and effort to recycling, we must provide a fresh air, clean water and an unpolluted environment for our descendants.There are many ways to recycle.First, we have to separate garbage from those things which can be recycled.For example, paper, glass, plastic, metal, and battery can be recycled.Every communities have different days to recycle, after having dinner, you can it throw it out to recycling trucks to be taken away.Second, the plastic bags have to use again and again because It can make poisonous gases when it be blazed.Third, you have to dump the recyclable garbage in separate bags correctly.Finally, the government has to educate people through the media to put policy into practice.If we follow this advice, we will have a better environment in the future.
In order to protect our home, we have to reduce the amount of trash, and exalt the quality of life at the same time.Therefore, recycling is the best policy .If we devote time and effort to recycling, we must provide a fresh air, clean water and an unpolluted environment for our descendants.There are many ways to recycle.First, we have to separate garbage from those things which can be recycled.For example, paper, glass, plastic, metal, and battery can be recycled.Every communities have different days to recycle, after having dinner, you can it throw it out to recycling trucks to be taken away.Second, the plastic bags have to use again and again because It can make poisonous gases when it be blazed.Third, you have to dump the recyclable garbage in separate bags correctly.Finally, the government has to educate people through the media to put policy into practice.If we follow this advice, we will have a better environment in the future.
posted by Tina at 6:53 AM
4 Comments:
because "It" can make poisonous>>it
through the media to put policy into practice>>我覺得用put the policy 比較好
1.you can it throw it out to recycling trucks to be taken away.是不是多一個it
2.because It can make poisonous gases when it be blazed第一個it不用大寫，而且用it is blazed就好了吧
３．那個必須用太多have to 了可以用一些must by all means之類的。
４．我覺得前言有點太過冗長，而且recycle一直提到，雖然那是主題啦。不過可以把句子合併一下，精簡一點
1.effort to recycling那個effort to後面應該要加原形動詞
2.you can it throw it out to recycling trucks to be taken away.多個it
1.Taiwan is "like" a piece of sand in the desert
2.we "can" provide a fresh air, clean water and an unpolluted environment for our descendants.
3.Every "community" "has" different days to recycle
4.the plastic bags "can be" use again and again because "they" can make poisonous gases when "they are" blazed.
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